Admission Essay Help
Sentence and Paragraph Level
Does the essay reflect a relative mastery of usage, conventions and vocabulary?
Do the sentences and ideas follow one another in a logical and coherent fashion?
Does the essay reflect a relative knowledge of the proper conventions of grammar?
Do not simply use spell check or proofread your essay; these will not catch certain types of mistakes. Read your essay out loud. If a sentence doesn’t sound right, it’s probably because there is a mechanical or logical problem.
Do your sentences and words follow the proper conventions of punctuation and spelling?
Unified Theme or Subject
Narrow your topic to a single subject. Don’t try to write a broad, general essay on how your entire life has changed. You can’t do this in one page.
Remember that all essays ask for a theme that reflects cause and effect. The most important thing is how each experience has affected your life and your future experiences in college.
Are your ideas specific and coherent? Choose language that reflects and relates specific ideas.
Creativity engages the reader. Don’t be afraid to take risks with your writing. Use creative examples.
Make sure your points follow logically. Utilize an outline to help organize your essay in a logical fashion.
Use specific examples to help make your points clear; it will make your essay solid and convincing. Examples render your points in a concrete, understandable fashion.
Emphasize how these experiences have helped to shape you into the person you are today and how college will be a continuation of that positive growth.